What did I let myself in for? Rebecca, of Fake Flamenco fame, sets a monthly poetry challenge. Here’s what she’s decided on this month: ‘For October, we will each create a poem about a place we love. Write a poem in free verse (unrhyming) of fewer than 50 words about a favorite location.’ Rebecca’s own poem uses only words beginning with ‘s’. I had to join in.
I knew I wanted to write something about our years in France, when we lived in a small town in the foothills of the Pyrenees (hence the name of my blog). Our own town’s name is a bit cumbersome for the purpose – Laroque d’Olmes. So I chose a hamlet nearby, a bit higher up the mountains than us, simply because it begins with a P. Don’t ask me why P seemed a good idea. You can decide when you’ve read my offering.
Péreille
Picturesque Péreille -
prettily placed.
Population? Puny.
Previously peopled by productive peasants -
potatoes, peas, poultry, a pig, pastureland….
Presently preferred by Parisian pleasure-seekers.
Pourquoi pas?
Pastoral, perfectly peaceful Péreille:
proximate prominent peaks -
a Pyrenean playground.
Plateaux, peaks & pinnacles!
As I knew you would, you’ve done a grand job, missus! You omitted to say that meeting the challenge meant you had to select a letter to start each of your words… and you did fine with P.
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You’re absolutely right! And that’s because Rebecca doesn’t ention it. Regular readers know it was on her mind from a previous post, and her own example features the letter ‘s’. I’ll alter my post – thanks.
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I did wonder, because I’d read Rebecca’s post and was a bit surprised at the direction it took. I couldn’t find a succinct way to say the words all needed to start with…whatever! I’m sure you’ll do better. Happy Sunday!
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P certainly peaks or gives pique to this poem about a particular Pyrenean place!
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Perfect praise! Thanks: can’t think of a thank you type word beginning with ‘p’.
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Very clever. Perfectly painted picture.
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Praise! Perfect! Thanks!
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Oh, this is excellent, Margaret! I love your line about population… puny!
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I know. A bit rude though, in’yt it? But 190 is, well, puny.
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Fab
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Innocent fun, anyway!
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Pristine pure poetry, parfait!
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Now that was a good “P” 😁
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Thanks Brian!
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well, I think it’s wonderful. And who knew there were so many descriptive words beginning with P!
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Indeed! A bit exhausting actually.
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Preposterous perhaps, powerfully perfect. I find it’s always wise to start anything with a P nowadays!
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I think you did a good job, I don’t think I could manage all with words beginning with one letter
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It was a challenge, certainly. But fun.
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Brilliant, it reads as if the words came easily, but just one letter is a challenge. you have given me an idea for a writing exercise for our writers’ group.
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Oh ideas like this are excellent within a writing group. Much head-scratching required. Have fun!
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Perfectly penned! Perhaps preposterous, pleasing plenty!
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Petty pernicious, perhaps?
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I loved the poem–excellent penning.
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Thanks so much.
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I liked your verses. Beautiful photo, too!
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Thank you x 2!
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Very good! I do like alliteration.
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Agreed, Anabel! Amateurish alliteration … always.
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Particularly peerless poem. Praise poet’s participation!
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Perfectly paltry participation! Prounouncements ‘preciated!
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Prevalent perception proved poetess.
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Rebecca. Peerless & professional poet pundit! (We’d better stop this NOW Rebecca. We’ll exhaust ourselves! 😉)
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This is so clever, I’m slightly in awe!
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Thanks Sarah. Just a bit of innocent fun really.
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Alliterative Abundance Appreciated!
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Acknowledged! Apppreciated also!
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Love your poem! The photo is beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Perfect poetry. 🙂
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Pretty preposterous!
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This is excellent!
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Thanks so much!
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Your welcome 😊
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