The other week, I accepted a challenge. Sammi Cox of Whispers and Echoes asked her readers to write a story in 100 words – neither more nor less. And yesterday she published my offering. Thanks, Sammi!
‘He just can’t do it any more. Miles he’d walk. Every day. Now he can hardly get to the end of the road. And food! He’s hardly eating. His digestive system seems to be shot. Just … don’t ask.’
‘Well he’s a pretty decent age you know. He’s done well. He’s not going to get any better. You might consider whether it’s time to put him out of his misery, before he really starts to suffer’.
‘To be honest, I’d been wondering myself. Just let me get used to the idea.’ said Rover, with a business-like flick of his tail.
Margaret Lawrenson blogs at From Pyrenees to Pennines
Brilliant!
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Thanks Jude.
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You are very good with words.
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Thanks Jude. I think most of us who blog are!
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Love it!
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A rare moment of inspiration!
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Oh, cool!
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Thanks Sue.
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You have such a good way with words as this latest success proves.
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Thanks so much Susan.
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Excellent!
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Thanks Jo. Flash fiction isn’t normally my thing. But – why not, once in a while?
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When you have a great story line 🤗💗
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😉
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Fabulous!
and with 100 words you’ve got something to work with. When I was in my first or second year at varsity we wrote 50 word stories in our creative writing class. Pfff … but the most difficult thing about it was that it was before computers and we wrote in columns to count the words and re-wrote and re-wrote.
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What a pain! Yes, I wrote this in Google docs, so could get instant word counts, but only when I wanted them. Writing in columns sounds stifling.
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Well, we made do. Along with carving our own wheels out of suitable stones and walking 15 miles to school in blizzards with no food … 😉
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Ah yrs. The Good Old Days when we all Knew Our Place and Didn’t Speak until Spoken To.
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My comment on the original post : Oh yes! What a great idea, it should catch on very quickly.
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I’d sign up …
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Fabulous 🙂
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Thanks Brian.
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Sweet with a twist of the “tale” 😊 like a great short story should be.
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Yes, you gotta have a twist!
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Very clever. Very clever indeed 😊
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Aw thanks Sandra. A real compliment from a wordsmith such as you!
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